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Thursday, November 08, 2012

 
and so i grabbed my surfboard and hit the road
only to find
the further away you are from me
the closer i feel you.
ridiculously so, because the early mornings
lying next to you
is a sublime monotony of bliss
it's the times alone thru the day
when the hours are long and the sun burns
a road map of freckles and future melanoma's
on the arm i casually hang out my window
as i drive on searching for treasure,
ridiculously so, when i already have found
whatever it is
i keep thinking i'm looking for.
it's a shame that i ever take for granted
your eyes
(or your smile)
(or your soft sweet voice)
and so i grabbed my surfboard and hit the road
only to find
the further away you are from me
the closer i feel you.




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ahhhhhhhhhh. O love this and you *HUGS*
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love it-
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I like this.  It paints a nice picture while still remaining fluid enough to read easily.

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This is the best one you've published. I love the image that it paints.

Come see us this weekend. Screw thunderstorms. We can camp in my house, play stupid games. It'll be fun.
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~♥

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the love is etched in your surfboard ~ *closer* ..i still love this. i'm a little jealous my love can't say such words so beautifully.
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@dwhr - where o where are you, our ambiguous one?
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